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moving image poem [Jun. 8th, 2004|01:36 pm]
dead poets' society


hey guys, i'm doing a lot of poetry in creative writing, and i need to turn in a bunch on friday for a portfolio. can you guys let me know what you think?

Clumsy kitty.

Ever so gently
Ever so slowly
Canvass the shelf
Vase on the left
Candle on the right

Slowly, slowly.
Gently, gently.
Reach without
Jumping? NO!
Whiskers fit.

Steady, ready.
So close.
One, two,
Three, GO!
Made it.

Crash, clink
BAM, dink.
Vase is
Candle is
Knocked over.

From: sunday__m0rning
2004-06-08 12:20 pm (UTC)
i love your use of onomatopoeia... i hope i spelled that right.

<3 charlotte
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